How To Make This Better.

[Pudd]

It looks a bit off, but I dont know how to fix it. Apart from the obvious lack of hair which Im going to add in later. Also, how do I make the eyes better?

[Mattasaur94]

I think it looks good, a bit of hair would add some more character to it, but, considering its not completed, its great. Just trying to think of creative criticism.... Uhhm...
I can't think of anything, I think it looks great, the eyes are good. If anything, the right-side of the forehead might stick out slightly, but meh. I see it as gewd. ^^

[Pudd]

Hah if you think it sticks out now you shouldve seen it earlier

[Marcie]

To me it looks slightly squished. As in I think it's too skinny on the 'X' axis.

[Shadowhunter]

I kinda see that to ^^ but the eyes look so good on it (: um you could add a little shading in some parts..but I really cant criticize cause i think it looks good how it is

[SapphireDragon13]

It looks a bit off, but I dont know how to fix it. Apart from the obvious lack of hair which Im going to add in later. Also, how do I make the eyes better?

I think it would look better if the face didn't look quite as slanted--using a mirror when drawing helps alot with that, because sometimes you don't really realize how awkward a picture looks until you see it in reverse. [Believe me, I do it all the time, and it really helps.] ^_^

~Jenelle

P.S. Holding a picture up to the light with the drawn portion facing away from you works, also. ... I hope this helps. Oh, and I also hope it wasn't too harsh, the picture really isn't that bad. :)

[Giles]

I think that either adding some depth to the right eye or removing some of the shading from the left would greatly increase the feeling of life behind the lines.

[2D]

Elongate the nose, fix the forehead right above the eyes, constantly look in the mirror, profit.

[Pudd]

Thanks for the help guys ^.^ ive had to start again though because when i fixed it i was going over it with a sharpie and my dog thought it would be funny to start licking my hand >.> but now i know what was wrong with this one, i can avoid in the next one ^.^