Shadowhunter
February 15th, 2010, 09:47 PM
okay I'm not intirely sure if this is appropriate cause it is a horror and i do decribe some violence so if it isn't allowed you can remove it or w/e
I Hope everyone likes it (:
The summer of 2010 has finally arrived! And the gang is already planning the trip to Jeff’s family’s cabin; near the old Butcher Mill near the Rockies. The cabin has been passed down to generations of kin from the Driscoll family line; some say it even dates back to the founders of the town. Not many people use the old cabins up around the Butcher Mill, at least not since the horrible events that happened up there around the eve of all Hallows eve. It all started twenty years ago, when a few locals went missing on their way to the mountains for a camping trip. Now mind you, that these few locals turned into at most twenty missing persons’ reports. The cops eventually did catch on that these poor souls were being dragging to the mill and being butchered and preserved for cannibalism.
When they arrived there at the scene it was a pool of blood in every hallway and room; dead bodies were being hanged up for use later on the ceiling as if cow meat. The Killer Jack Smith was found with his head blown off. When they searched the premises, they found a little girl by the name of Melinda Lee; she was 10 years old. After she was properly medicated no one ever heard from her again. They say she haunts the old mill others say she just up and left, which do you believe? Now twenty years later, this group of teens just out of high school dare walk upon these haunted and unsafe grounds. What will become of them? We shall see.
They were driving down the highway an hour away until the cabin.”Are we there yet?” Chelsea said breaking the silence. “No there’s still at least an hour left of driving”, Jeff said. “Can we stop just for a second?” Morgan said. “Can it wait?” said Jeff.”NO it cannot” said Morgan. Jeff pulled the car over to the side of the road. Morgan went into the woods and carried on with his business. When he finished, proceeding through the woods he felt as if he was being watched. Morgan picked up speed, and then tripped over a concealed root. When he looked up, a woman was standing there talking about crazy things. “The cat told me to do it, I did not mean to kill them all” said the mysterious girl. She lunged forward, shaking Morgan and screaming “You are next! You are all going to die! The cat says so.” Morgan kicked her off of him and ran to the road. He jumped into the car and told them to step on it. The rest of the drive was silent after Morgan explained him.
They arrived at the cabin late at night and when inside noticed on the walls was painted in a red spray paint “your all next!” Everyone in the cabin dismissed this as a stupid prank and went off to bed. Later on, around midnight a loud shriek came from Shannon’s room. Almost everyone runs to Shannon’s room. Shannon, whom was terrified, was sitting up in bed just pointing at something. Jeff followed her glare to the window and there outside were the very same women who attacked Morgan in the woods. She was banging on the window hard; and her voice was muffled a bit from the rain but you could hear her say “You’re all doomed”
Morgan walks in sleepy eyed and says “what’s going on?!” “Where have you been? Jeff said. “Where exactly do you think? Bed obviously” Jeff glanced back over to the window and noticed the girl was gone and in her place was “You are all going to die.” “What are we going to do?” said Shannon while sobbing. “I do not know.” said Jeff. The power went out all of a sudden and Andrew screamed “Guys get down here now!”Jeff told the others to stay behind as him and Morgan ran down stairs. They were horrified to see a limp body near Andrew’s feet. It was Robbie; his throat had been slit clean and a pool of blood around him. “Oh my God Robbie, but how did he…” “The killer took advantage of when everyone was upstairs paying attention to Shannon” said Andrew.
Alyson came down stairs with the others and they were all just as shocked and horrified as the others. “We need to split up everyone, me and Alyson will check the basement the rest of you check the cabin”, said Jeff. Alyson proceeded to go to the basement. “Are you sure this is what we should be doing?” she said. “I am sure” Jeff said. Andrew and Chelsea are in the kitchen investigating. “I’m so scared”, Chelsea said. Andrew motioned towards her and comforted her, and proceeded to kiss her. In the middle of kissing he felt a sharp sting in his chest. He let go of her and realized she had been stabbed. Her face filled with pain and horror; as she takes her last dying breath her breaths I love you. “NO”, Andrew says. The killer motioned towards him than silence. “All the cords have been slashed” said Jeff. “Thump” “what was that?” Alyson said in fear. “I am not sure come on” said Jeff. They went upstairs and found the source of the crashing sound there on the floor laying limp was a cold Shannon and a terrified and
Morgan. She had been hung. “It is all my fault I didn’t get here in time” said Morgan. The next bits are a blur, me and Morgan went up stairs to see if the killer was up there. We ended up knocking it out the second floor window. When the police arrived the killer vanished along with all our friends bodies and our happiness.
One Year later:
Alyson and Jeff are walking down the beach when Alyson’s phone rings. Its caller ID said Morgan. She answered it and was confronted by a distorted voice, “If you do not want your friend to be skinned alive for my soup, I suggest you come home fast; me and him are waiting, and incase you decided not to..just remember if you try any stunts I know who to hurt, all your loved ones will disappear one by one.” The killer ended up beginning that 12 year old from 20 years ago, the butchers daughter whom inherited his taste for human blood. No one really knows what really became of Alyson and Jeff. Did they enter the witness protection unit? Were they murdered? Well only time will tell.
I Hope everyone likes it (:
The summer of 2010 has finally arrived! And the gang is already planning the trip to Jeff’s family’s cabin; near the old Butcher Mill near the Rockies. The cabin has been passed down to generations of kin from the Driscoll family line; some say it even dates back to the founders of the town. Not many people use the old cabins up around the Butcher Mill, at least not since the horrible events that happened up there around the eve of all Hallows eve. It all started twenty years ago, when a few locals went missing on their way to the mountains for a camping trip. Now mind you, that these few locals turned into at most twenty missing persons’ reports. The cops eventually did catch on that these poor souls were being dragging to the mill and being butchered and preserved for cannibalism.
When they arrived there at the scene it was a pool of blood in every hallway and room; dead bodies were being hanged up for use later on the ceiling as if cow meat. The Killer Jack Smith was found with his head blown off. When they searched the premises, they found a little girl by the name of Melinda Lee; she was 10 years old. After she was properly medicated no one ever heard from her again. They say she haunts the old mill others say she just up and left, which do you believe? Now twenty years later, this group of teens just out of high school dare walk upon these haunted and unsafe grounds. What will become of them? We shall see.
They were driving down the highway an hour away until the cabin.”Are we there yet?” Chelsea said breaking the silence. “No there’s still at least an hour left of driving”, Jeff said. “Can we stop just for a second?” Morgan said. “Can it wait?” said Jeff.”NO it cannot” said Morgan. Jeff pulled the car over to the side of the road. Morgan went into the woods and carried on with his business. When he finished, proceeding through the woods he felt as if he was being watched. Morgan picked up speed, and then tripped over a concealed root. When he looked up, a woman was standing there talking about crazy things. “The cat told me to do it, I did not mean to kill them all” said the mysterious girl. She lunged forward, shaking Morgan and screaming “You are next! You are all going to die! The cat says so.” Morgan kicked her off of him and ran to the road. He jumped into the car and told them to step on it. The rest of the drive was silent after Morgan explained him.
They arrived at the cabin late at night and when inside noticed on the walls was painted in a red spray paint “your all next!” Everyone in the cabin dismissed this as a stupid prank and went off to bed. Later on, around midnight a loud shriek came from Shannon’s room. Almost everyone runs to Shannon’s room. Shannon, whom was terrified, was sitting up in bed just pointing at something. Jeff followed her glare to the window and there outside were the very same women who attacked Morgan in the woods. She was banging on the window hard; and her voice was muffled a bit from the rain but you could hear her say “You’re all doomed”
Morgan walks in sleepy eyed and says “what’s going on?!” “Where have you been? Jeff said. “Where exactly do you think? Bed obviously” Jeff glanced back over to the window and noticed the girl was gone and in her place was “You are all going to die.” “What are we going to do?” said Shannon while sobbing. “I do not know.” said Jeff. The power went out all of a sudden and Andrew screamed “Guys get down here now!”Jeff told the others to stay behind as him and Morgan ran down stairs. They were horrified to see a limp body near Andrew’s feet. It was Robbie; his throat had been slit clean and a pool of blood around him. “Oh my God Robbie, but how did he…” “The killer took advantage of when everyone was upstairs paying attention to Shannon” said Andrew.
Alyson came down stairs with the others and they were all just as shocked and horrified as the others. “We need to split up everyone, me and Alyson will check the basement the rest of you check the cabin”, said Jeff. Alyson proceeded to go to the basement. “Are you sure this is what we should be doing?” she said. “I am sure” Jeff said. Andrew and Chelsea are in the kitchen investigating. “I’m so scared”, Chelsea said. Andrew motioned towards her and comforted her, and proceeded to kiss her. In the middle of kissing he felt a sharp sting in his chest. He let go of her and realized she had been stabbed. Her face filled with pain and horror; as she takes her last dying breath her breaths I love you. “NO”, Andrew says. The killer motioned towards him than silence. “All the cords have been slashed” said Jeff. “Thump” “what was that?” Alyson said in fear. “I am not sure come on” said Jeff. They went upstairs and found the source of the crashing sound there on the floor laying limp was a cold Shannon and a terrified and
Morgan. She had been hung. “It is all my fault I didn’t get here in time” said Morgan. The next bits are a blur, me and Morgan went up stairs to see if the killer was up there. We ended up knocking it out the second floor window. When the police arrived the killer vanished along with all our friends bodies and our happiness.
One Year later:
Alyson and Jeff are walking down the beach when Alyson’s phone rings. Its caller ID said Morgan. She answered it and was confronted by a distorted voice, “If you do not want your friend to be skinned alive for my soup, I suggest you come home fast; me and him are waiting, and incase you decided not to..just remember if you try any stunts I know who to hurt, all your loved ones will disappear one by one.” The killer ended up beginning that 12 year old from 20 years ago, the butchers daughter whom inherited his taste for human blood. No one really knows what really became of Alyson and Jeff. Did they enter the witness protection unit? Were they murdered? Well only time will tell.