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peaceloverugby
February 10th, 2010, 10:20 PM
(This is the first poem I've ever written in my whole life. It's about the end of the Nine Years' War in Ireland, if I make historical errors, I apologise :P)

While we slept, sound at night
From our shores they left,
The Earls in flight.

To Rome they fled,
To lick wounds once healed;
After McHugh bled
In Carlow's fields.

They went to Spain,
Taking jewels and pearls;
Leaving us to our pain
The Flight of the Earls

colts1994
February 10th, 2010, 10:21 PM
nice

Icarus7
February 10th, 2010, 11:03 PM
man you got talent!! ;)

Nelson
February 11th, 2010, 09:17 AM
for a first time poem, its great +_+

MysticalBurrito
February 11th, 2010, 10:17 AM
We'll be expecting more from you in the future? :P
It's very good.

peaceloverugby
February 11th, 2010, 11:44 PM
Well thank you everyone :)

And no Karina lol, I wouldn't be expecting anymore, sorry

MysticalBurrito
February 12th, 2010, 11:57 AM
Well thank you everyone :)

And no Katrina lol, I wouldn't be expecting anymore, sorry

:cry2:
But... Oh well. That's what they all say... xP
*Cough* And it's Karina not Katrina...

peaceloverugby
February 12th, 2010, 02:51 PM
sorry, I know your name. that was hitting an extra key, not typing a completely different name XD