Marcie
February 9th, 2010, 08:58 PM
I wrote this about 2 years ago, and I think it's horrible. What do you guys think?
V1
On the outside is a wall
That hides the perfect lie
No one really knows the pain
That's hidden inside
I know how it feels
To be the one who's never seen
Chorus
There's still hope
This is not the end
You have it in your hands
A beautiful life
With so much to give
Don't through it away
V2
The pain that you feel
It can't last forever
Don't give up
This is not the end
You don't have to hide
Behind your wall
I'm here for you
I'm here for you
Yeah so that's basically it... (don't yell at me for not adding punctuation please lol)
Keep in mind I wrote this over 2 years ago... I know it's cliché..
V1
On the outside is a wall
That hides the perfect lie
No one really knows the pain
That's hidden inside
I know how it feels
To be the one who's never seen
Chorus
There's still hope
This is not the end
You have it in your hands
A beautiful life
With so much to give
Don't through it away
V2
The pain that you feel
It can't last forever
Don't give up
This is not the end
You don't have to hide
Behind your wall
I'm here for you
I'm here for you
Yeah so that's basically it... (don't yell at me for not adding punctuation please lol)
Keep in mind I wrote this over 2 years ago... I know it's cliché..