Ookami

[SapphireDragon13]

Ookami
By: Jenelle

http://i262.photobucket.com/albums/ii100/FirestarOfDarkness13/OokamiAkairo-2.jpg

So, basically, this is the result of a random suggestion by some people... A male figure, a slightly more complex position, and a semi-different idea--no scythes or foxes... He's an arctic wolf. Anyways, I'd really like to know what you all think. Thanks!

~Jenelle

Drawn with:
-Pencil
-Faber-Castell Inking Pens
-Copic Ciao Markers

[Sage]

1) Still think you should try a facial expression besides : l
2) Feet are disproportionately small.
3) Arms are too thin for a torso that defined.
4) Pillow shading. (mostly applies to spriting but is relevant, google it)
5) Arm and leg anatomy is just awkward, be sure to get the skeletal/muscle frame just right when you're in the sketch phase.
6) Perspective on the sword just looks weird.
7) Probably something else but that's all I can catch for now.

[SapphireDragon13]

1) Still think you should try a facial expression besides : l
2) Feet are disproportionately small.
3) Arms are too thin for a torso that defined.
4) Pillow shading. (mostly applies to spriting but is relevant, google it)
5) Arm and leg anatomy is just awkward, be sure to get the skeletal/muscle frame just right when you're in the sketch phase.
6) Perspective on the sword just looks weird.
7) Probably something else but that's all I can catch for now.

I'm not a very emotional person--thus, the emotionless expressions. I suck at drawing with the proportions right, hands and feet are the hardest thing to accurately draw on a person [in my opinion]. As for the sword, it looks a little unusual, based on the position, but that's where I wanted it to be. Based on the angle of the hand and how the sword is being held, it isn't *completely* wrong...?

~Jenelle

P.S. Yeah, I'll draw a picture with emotion included, I suppose...

[Sage]

I'm not a very emotional person--thus, the emotionless expressions.

Well, I don't have a vagina, breath fire, or own my own arsenal of firearms, but I draw women, dragons, and gunslingers all the time. Besides, you drew a guy, so I take it you're not a man either. ^_^

I suck at drawing with the proportions right, hands and feet are the hardest thing to accurately draw on a person [in my opinion].

Practicepracticepractice.

As for the sword, it looks a little unusual, based on the position, but that's where I wanted it to be. Based on the angle of the hand and how the sword is being held, it isn't *completely* wrong...?

Practicepracticepractice.

P.S. Yeah, I'll draw a picture with emotion included, I suppose...

Good! Only way you'll ever get better as an artist is to try new things, even if you don't think you can do them perfectly- especially if you don't think you can do them perfectly.

[SapphireDragon13]

[QUOTE=Deschain;775223]Well, I don't have a vagina, breath fire, or own my own arsenal of firearms, but I draw women, dragons, and gunslingers all the time. Besides, you drew a guy, so I take it you're not a man either. ^_^ QUOTE]

Lol, yeah I can see your point here. :P Although, having your own arsenal and dragons would be pretty awesome. XD

~Jenelle

[Asylum]

i think it looks good

[SapphireDragon13]

i think it looks good

Thanks!

~Jenelle