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Asylum
February 2nd, 2010, 09:03 PM
The world crashes underneath me
It’s getting harder to breathe
Feel the rope around my neck
Then just let go, to all that is mundane

Dying may seems easy, and life is hard.
But we can’t keep holding on,
No we can’t keep holding on.
Broken and lifeless, just another empty carcass in the wind.

martin2008
February 2nd, 2010, 10:03 PM
wow, that good. anything happened on u?

Asylum
February 2nd, 2010, 11:02 PM
thanx :) nah they are just feeligns, from hellish nights. however, i'm not suicidal anymore so i jsut write out my emotions like that on paper, and everythign can be ok,. for the most part...