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Quick_Sylver
January 28th, 2010, 09:19 PM
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SlightlySane
January 28th, 2010, 09:21 PM
Becky this is just so amazing I love it so much

Shadowhunter
January 28th, 2010, 09:25 PM
this is awesome becky ! (: i love it, its really touching

Quick_Sylver
January 29th, 2010, 11:08 PM
Thanks guys. :) I know I'm rather critical of my work, but this poem is really bad. :3 Thankyou though :)

Kahn
January 30th, 2010, 12:24 AM
Becky it was beautiful. I loved it. It's better than any poem I can right. I think the last poem I wrote was titled "Wrinkle Wrinkle Mrs. Parr". A parody of Twinkle Twinkle Little Star. Lol.

Uprising
January 30th, 2010, 01:08 AM
I like it a lot. It reminds me of how I always wanted a twin because we would be going through the same things and would be easier to talk to them.

Quick_Sylver
January 30th, 2010, 01:19 AM
Adam-Thankyou. :) Its not beautiful, its horrible. Take a look at everyone elses' work, then mine. :P also, Mr. Grammar Nazi, It's write not right :P

Jeff-Thankyou. :) That's sorta what its based on, but its also based on someone in real life :3