Alfred Pennyworth
January 26th, 2010, 02:38 AM
okay, let it be known, i dislike writing. but for some reason, every once in a while, i get this urge to write...anything....tonight is one of those times. this is a little something that i just wrote on impulse, i just had to get these feelings out. It's about an old friend of mine.....
i fell in love when i first saw you. i wanted to tell you so much, but i couldn't get up the courage. we were always there for each other. if i was sad, you would cheer me up. we were best friends. around you, i felt like i could be myself instead of the false me that so many people see. when i finally got the courage to tell you, you went and broke my heart. it stunned me, i couldn't believe you'd shunned me. it depressed me. for weeks, i would cry at night. it made me feel like i wasn't good enough for you. it had felt like you were the only one for me, like we were meant to be together, soul mates. i will never be the same. you broke my heart. i understand your reason, but that doesn't lessen the pain one bit. we spent years together, when you left, you took a part of me with you, and when you said no, it was like a cold hard knife right through me. I have found someone else, and i'm happy as i've ever been, like we agreed, but you have been permanently engraved into my mind, i never will forget.
feel free to critique
i fell in love when i first saw you. i wanted to tell you so much, but i couldn't get up the courage. we were always there for each other. if i was sad, you would cheer me up. we were best friends. around you, i felt like i could be myself instead of the false me that so many people see. when i finally got the courage to tell you, you went and broke my heart. it stunned me, i couldn't believe you'd shunned me. it depressed me. for weeks, i would cry at night. it made me feel like i wasn't good enough for you. it had felt like you were the only one for me, like we were meant to be together, soul mates. i will never be the same. you broke my heart. i understand your reason, but that doesn't lessen the pain one bit. we spent years together, when you left, you took a part of me with you, and when you said no, it was like a cold hard knife right through me. I have found someone else, and i'm happy as i've ever been, like we agreed, but you have been permanently engraved into my mind, i never will forget.
feel free to critique