To the world, Adieu. [Poem]

[ErykaInspire.]

Written really fast.. and not all that great. Just me venting a bit of emotion.

The cold black air
whips across my face
through the open window
into this small space.

You're upset at me again
and you're going 80 miles or more
along the thru-way,
the pedal is against the floor.

There's rain against the windshield
as I send my last goodbyes
I'm writing faster than I ever had
vision blurred with tears in my eyes.

You hit a patch of ice,
and skid too far to the right
a 8 wheeler didn't see us coming
as we barreled into sight

You try to turn the wheel
but the ice drags you along.
The sound of crunching metal and glass
then all sound is gone.

There's flashing lights,
and you're sitting up, crying
The doctors shine a light on my face
and they tell him that i'm dying.

The blood is warm against my cheek
as I try to look at you
I can't move.. baby, what's happening?
I made you mad but what did I do?

They put a cloth over my face
I try to tear it away
but I can no longer move
and the air in my lungs wont stay.

I whisper my last goodbye
as I take my last gasp of air.
I loved you with my life,
Irony? No.. this isn't fair.

To the world I wanted to inspire;
I bid farewell. Adieu.
Just remember one thing,
My last goodbye is to you.

[Shadowhunter]

wow.....that was really good (y)

[ErykaInspire.]

Thank you(:
Although it could be alot better.. I wrote this quite quickly :p

[Shadowhunter]

no problem talent needs to be complimented on which you have alot of (: i thought it was perfect

[ErykaInspire.]

Awh :D Thank you very much ^-^

[Shadowhunter]

no problem 8D

[Affliction]

eryka that was beautiful, it almost made me tear up. you have a great talent and dont you ever forget that :)

[ErykaInspire.]

Thank you, Aliee <3