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MysticalBurrito
January 21st, 2010, 11:50 PM
Invisible to my eyes,
I walk right through you,
They say there are angels in everyone’s life,
Angels would never hurt you,
Maybe angels are there to help us through the toughest of time in a bitter way,
You were my angel in the dark,
But if angels would never hurt anyone, why did you hurt me?

You tore at my mind,
Fooled with my emotions,
Rejected,
Neglected,
And toyed with everything that meant anything to me.
Without your shit I wouldn’t be the person I am now,
My Angel In The Dark, I’ll never forget the nights we spent keeping each other alive,
But to you, was it just a game?
A chance at fame?
To someday be remembered as the person who saved my life.

My dear sweet angel in the dark, the lights are on now,
I don’t need you now,
The hurt you caused me has been enough,
Open your wings and fly away,
Maybe somehow on the way to your next victim you’ll get shot down from the sky and land in a field of spiked roses,
My angel in the dark, you left a scar on my heart.
I’ll never forget you,
You left a horrible taste in my mind.

ibanezjoey1007
January 24th, 2010, 12:40 PM
All the emotions of a beak-up in one poem. Nice.

MysticalBurrito
January 24th, 2010, 01:21 PM
It's not from a break up it's a failed friendship. And thank you. :)

Shadowhunter
January 24th, 2010, 01:42 PM
This is really good sorry for the reason you wrote it , but its good! I dont know how anyone can write poems i cant for the life of me in english class...keep up the good work :D

MysticalBurrito
January 28th, 2010, 07:44 PM
Thank you for your comment sorry I didn't answer the stupid problems with VT kicked this off the list. x_x