Disowned. [Poem]

[ErykaInspire.]

Kso.. I'm having madd family issues. For the past seven-eight years my grandma hasn't been much of a grandma. She's been making a list of lies about my mother that has been tearing the rest of the family apart. So I wrote her this nice LONG letter, along with this poem. Describing how much I resent her (Linda) and my Aunt (Kelly) Who helped break everything.
Comment on the poem itself, please? Not my family issues(:



Take the paper and the pen
and list out her flaws
Write out every one of her mistakes
for such a worthless cause.

In the end you will find
That you lose most of all
When your family turns away
and doesn't answer when you call.

When you're alone at your funeral
I won't stop and question why.
I'll just turn to a piece of paper
and let out a pitiful sigh.

I've sat aside and watched
as my family fell apart.
Now your name is scratched out
of every inch of my heart.

So don't you dare come to me
and tell me how much you care.
I know you don't love me,
Because you were never there.

So in the end, Linda, Dear,
How much is it worth?
Not only lose your family
but the one you've given birth.

For it IS all your fault
and I no longer question you
Because all I know is pain,
that's just what you do.

Be happy with Kelly,
I really hope you are.
Because she's all that you have left.
You have gone way too far.

I bid you farewell,
my last hello and goodbye.
And I do it with a smile,
no, I didn't even cry.

[SlightlySane]

This is very deep and for some reason thrilling. It's amazing YOU TELL ER ERYKA!

[ErykaInspire.]

Hahha, Thank you, Ryne(:
And you should've read the letter part (x

[Quick_Sylver]

Aweshum!!! ^_^

[SlightlySane]

I read the letter part eryka but I still had to say it :P

[ibanezjoey1007]

Eryka,

The way you can portray raw, real emotion in your poetry makes me want to work harder at my own (and post it here!) You are an Inspiration to me.

-Joey

[ErykaInspire.]

Your words mean more than you know, Joey(:
Thank you so much <3