Well..

[ToRch]

This girl...

What have we driven her to?
What has she become?
All our expectations, our hopes and dreams for her
We pushed her too hard.
We pushed her right down.
We pushed, pushed,
Pushed into the ground...

This girl, did she ever truly get her wings?
This girl, losing the grace in the song that she sings.
This girl, caught in a web of so many things.
This girl, this girl, this girl...
She's taken too much.

She fought for a struggle, she clenched to a hope.
She worked so hard, so hard for those fools.
Never appreciated, never acknowledged.
This girl, this girl. She tried, tried so hard. It was never enough.

She fought it, yeah, she struggled,
But she clenched to a hope
She was breaking her back
Effort burned out for the fools

This girl, did she ever truly obtain her wings?
This girl, losing the grace in the song that she sings.
This girl, caught in a web of so many things.
This girl, this girl, this girl...
She's taken too much.
She's taken too much.
She's taken...

Oh, this girl, this girl, this girl!



Inspired by a girl I used to know so well, who's been lost to the fools who decided she needed to change. Written by me and my buddy who's on this site, but refuses to tell me his username. xD I'll figure it out.

~ToRch.

[Quick_Sylver]

Woah...Dude...o.0 are you physic or somethin'?

[ToRch]

Nah. Just like to write. There's been a load of mixed feelings about stuff, and writing's a great way to get that out. ^^;; But I've watched this girl change, and it's really kinda sad what she's become.. I loved her, really I did.. lol It's a long story that doesn't need to be expanded... But I'm getting off topic here. I assume you enjoyed it?

[Quick_Sylver]

Not enjoyable. At least not to me, for reasons of my own. It made me realize something however. Thankyou for that.

[ToRch]

Was it written well at least? >.< Writing's sorta important to me and constructive critism would be welcome. ^^;

[DaretoFallup]

Wow, that was really nice. It made me stop and think as well.

[Quick_Sylver]

It's written extremely well and excellently put. I apologize for my abruptness last night. I was being a bitch to everyone >.<

[ToRch]

It's alright. ^^;; No harm done at all. Don't worry 'bout it.