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SlightlySane
January 16th, 2010, 12:07 AM
Drip drop drip drop
Dancing in the rain
Splish splash splish splash
It shows us their pain

Happily these children dance
As these raindrops fall
But you will see, soon to be
These drops are simply blood

Falling fast and running strong
Come my children sing along
The knife has lashed right in half
All the things you desired last

Drip drop, slip slash
Oh listen to their innocent laugh
The children only sing the song
With no idea that it is wrong

The blood to them is just the rain
Of no knowledge is it pain
They dance and twirl, spin and swirl
Hand in hand these boys and girls

One more time the knife will cut
A painful shower won’t let up
One more time my children sing
Knowing not who they’re hurting

MysticalBurrito
January 16th, 2010, 01:37 PM
Wow. That is great Ryne. ^_^

DaretoFallup
January 16th, 2010, 03:47 PM
Simply, amazing. I love it.

SlightlySane
January 16th, 2010, 10:08 PM
Thanks you guys, This one hold a lot of deep meaning to me. I love having a hidden message inside a poem :D

YesterdaysNews
January 16th, 2010, 11:23 PM
This is Really powerful Ryne

ErykaInspire.
January 17th, 2010, 08:53 PM
Holy fucking shit o.o
Excuse my english but WOW.
This, I think, is one of your best poems ever :D
Definitely one of the best i've ever read.

Asylum
January 20th, 2010, 06:21 PM
i love this.