Sadistic Love

[deadpie]

The sex is boring, and I need more
Erotic and brutal with you on the floor
Vicious and narcotic, love at best
With you pressed up all against my chest
Anything sharp or large must be used
Nothing I do can be refused
I need this violence

Everything I give you is never enough
I gave you all that I’ve got
What I want from you is some sadistic love
I want this dumb and boring relation-shit to stop

You say you want fix this
You’re afraid I’ll end it
Than obey what I say
And I will do what I came here to do
Use you and refuse you
Scar you
I need that feeling of control
That I don’t feel in my soul

I didn’t get what I want
I lost the game and I give up
This sadomasochism isn't as fun as it was
I need more of this sadistic love
I need that control
That I lost long ago.

[AllThatIsLeft]

I'll be honest the concept is strong,
but this poem seems forced and somewhat childish.
Kinda kills the whole violent feeling that it should have.

[deadpie]

I'll be honest the concept is strong,
but this poem seems forced and somewhat childish.
Kinda kills the whole violent feeling that it should have.

I felt like i was kind of missing something when I wrote it. Thanks for the response though.