Poem: Early Dawn!

[woody92]

This is a poem that is about how I feel in the morning on a school day! I hope you like it!

EARLY DAWN!

I get up early
On a Monday morning
Its 6AM
And I’m still yawning.

I drive down the long steep slope
On and on
There’s no hope.

I keep on going,
until I get to town.
When I’m there,
all I can do is frown.

I pay the money,
to get a ticket.
Then I think,
I’m gunna tell them,
Were to stick it.

I stand there waiting,
and out the corner of my eye,
I catch a glimpse,
a glimpse of light.

Its 7AM,
when it arrives.
I need to wake up,
but I close my eyes.

I have a long day ahead,
and all I want to do,
is go back to bed.

[bigguy2010]

I pay the money,
to get a ticket.
Then I think,
I’m gunna tell them,
Were to stick it.


That bit made me laugh! Good Poem mate!

[ibanezjoey1007]

Nice job Ryan. Sounds like something I would write in the summer after an all-nighter (it's happened lol).

[woody92]

Thanks Joey!
Here is some info behind my poem:
Well I wrote this at 7am on a monday morning on my way to school. If you didnt understand what its about, it is about me getting up in the morning and having to go in to my local town to go and catch a TRAIN to school! Yea I go everyday to school by train. I was bored and not looking faward to the day ahead! I hope you liked my poem! if it gets any comments Thanks In Advance!!