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JunkBondTrader
May 18th, 2006, 12:42 PM
I wrote this on new years eve, while heavily intoxicated by numberous different substances. God knows what it's about.

EDIT: I read that last part and realised it could be interpretd as somewhat racist. Let me clarify: IN NO WAY AM I RACIST.

There’s the message,
And the maker,
And then translucent green.
Hiding behind a cigarette,
She’s my Maybelline.

And they’re wearing red fedoras,
Trying to fit in.
They want the Amoeba to give them something back,
“Nothing more compelling than wearing a coloured hat!â€Â

Then the jelly’s got the jockey,
Controlling darkened races.
Wanting nothing more,
Than to fill in the white spaces.

Aηdy
May 19th, 2006, 06:14 PM
hmm, i cant make sence of that really lol, but its good tho!

Zazu
June 11th, 2006, 02:34 PM
I kinda understand, keep on writing.....

Parasite
July 3rd, 2006, 09:14 PM
wow,
you are talented.
please..write more!!

JunkBondTrader
July 4th, 2006, 01:58 PM
Heh, thanks. I just finished the first chapter of my short story if anyones interested. :)