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Harley Quinn
December 30th, 2009, 12:23 PM
She let her feelings grow
held in the tears she never knew
she couldn't see the window wide open
she fell into the unknown

Looking out from above
she cries
she dies a little each time
will she open her eyes this time?

To dreams that never were
she's just a broken angel
with wings that never showed
in the place she was in

The blessings she showed to you
she sinks as she smiles
faster each day she goes
your losing her

She's just a broken angel
wanting your blessing
so she can be set free
crushed in the world she once called home.

ErykaInspire.
December 30th, 2009, 12:29 PM
WOW o.o
I thought you said you weren't good w/ poetry!? xD
It's not the rhyming that makes it a poem, it's the story it tells and the picture it gives.
This is beautiful<3

Contra
December 30th, 2009, 01:57 PM
I totally agree with Eryka, it really gave me a mental image, your capacity to deliver emotions through your writing is astonishing! :)

YesterdaysNews
December 30th, 2009, 03:36 PM
Wow, its amazing Siobhan <3

Harley Quinn
December 31st, 2009, 12:29 AM
Eryka, I'm not good with poetry..somehow I write good poems like this one when I'm alone and have thinking time, also the urges...help my writing..:)

John, the emotion is basically mine, but deeper there is a hidden meaning to my poems that not many people find it. Haha spectatular.... Hm thanks :)

Amanda, thank you <3