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YesterdaysNews
December 28th, 2009, 12:28 AM
Calm down, deep breaths
I haven't forgotten, just relax
You're always on my mind
My top priority
My one and only baby
But thing is, while I am I
And you are you, I must hide
My affection.
They won't understand
About you and me
They won't see us baby
For what we really are
Lovers, with many battle scars
But you and I will make it
Just be patient baby
I haven't forgotten.

TigerLily
December 28th, 2009, 12:56 AM
The simplicity of this makes it quite beautiful, Amanda, you can just imagine it being whispered.. nice work, I like it :)

YesterdaysNews
December 28th, 2009, 02:05 AM
Thanks Rachel, that means a lot :]