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nick
December 26th, 2009, 06:31 AM
Imagine, if you can
a pure white rose of such perfect beauty
that all who see it are enchanted, bewitched,
and long to be nearer
for their senses to be beguiled by its sweet fragrence.

That such a rose could bear a thorn
can not be thought.
Oh sweet white rose
you seem too soft, too delicate,
to hide such sharpness.

Imagine too with what distress
comes to my mind
an image of a damaged petal
whose clean white purity seems strangely stained
by drops of blood.


for you with love

TigerLily
December 26th, 2009, 07:25 PM
One of the most beautiful things I have ever read.

-'-{[email protected]

nick
December 27th, 2009, 08:58 PM
Thankyou. It is, of course allegorical and was written with tears.

TigerLily
December 27th, 2009, 11:46 PM
I can't apologize enough Nick.. you're incredible and I love you and you should not cry a single tear, don't waste them. All I do is let you down, all of you, time and time over, I'm not worth your time at all. I don't want to bother you. This just breaks my heart.. I hate that I've hurt you like this. This is why I push people away, because I can't stand to see my own weakness be the cause of someone else's upset, even if it's just a passing thought. I don't quite know what else to say.. <3

nick
December 28th, 2009, 06:05 AM
You've never hurt me, dont think that way, you've never given me anything but friendship and kindness. I just want you to feel some love and support. <3

Origami
December 28th, 2009, 10:50 AM
Nick... wow.
I can't figure out why you stopped, this leaves me wanting more! D:
It's incredibly beautiful Nick. :3