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Underground_Network
December 21st, 2009, 02:50 PM
Two hearts collide:
A needle weaves the two
Together,
Now they're bonded
For forever.

Don't take that heart
That fragile heart
And tear apart
The bond we have.

We're now connected,
For forever,
Love extending
For forever.

As my heart beats,
Yours follows in sync,
We are forever,
You and me.

But I can feel
You tug at the strings,
As our hearts start to tear
At the seam that had brought...

The two of us together,
You said the words forever,
But now the bond has been severed,
I've lost my heart
For forever.

TigerLily
December 21st, 2009, 03:07 PM
Beautiful work Adam :) <3

Underground_Network
December 21st, 2009, 03:13 PM
Thank you Rachel. :)

woody92
December 21st, 2009, 04:23 PM
i like that alot i also like writing poems lol (but mine r rubbish LOL)

WELL DONE I LOVED IT

Blood
December 21st, 2009, 07:19 PM
Its Beautiful :)

-Silence
December 21st, 2009, 08:53 PM
Good job hun, its beautiful, really.
:hug2:

Underground_Network
December 22nd, 2009, 04:32 PM
Thank you Ryan and Jessica. :)

And thank you Heather. ^_^

:)

woody92
December 22nd, 2009, 05:32 PM
thats ok!!

clone
December 24th, 2009, 01:13 AM
i like it a lot love reading poetry from VT members :)