Falling in the Darkness (poem by me)

[Asylum]

i can't seem to get the words out.
i hate talking about it.
nothing is ever right anymore.
nothing is alright.
why is everything so wrong in my life?
my soul is being swallowed up by a dark abyss
its falling further and further into the dark
there is no escape for me
no hope, no light
there is only darkness
just surronded by the same feleing hate.
the feeling it pierces my skin and brings me back into an unpleasent world
a world of darkness.
i hate this feeling i want it to go away
i hate feeling this way.
i find my friend who understands
he is my lover and all that i need right now
he kisses my skin and leaves a crimson mark
a mark that will last forever
it brings me relief for only a moment but i like it.
i then slip back into the darkness
and in the darkness i lie dying.

[Krazymitch]

this is so deep. i luv it

[Obscene Eyedeas]

That is beautiful poetry i write some as wel it givess a great feeling of release dnt it?

[Asylum]

thanx guys and yes it does give a great feelign of realease :)