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Triceratops
December 11th, 2009, 10:57 AM
This is basically a piece I wrote recently that describes A LOT of what I feel. It may sound ridiculous but this has somewhat a deep meaning to me...

Tainted Chronicles Of A Hidden Crestfallen Mind

Bewilderment, which taints my own ambience
Sacred voices, lingering deep inside my mind
I hide beneath the façade of pure imagination

Deep in disarray, to destroy all harmony
Frost bitten palms, crawling underneath supple flesh
I hide beneath the façade of pure imagination

Fervid affliction, writhing through the soul
My reflection, pouncing from the casket nail
I hide beneath the façade of pure imagination

Throttled by lunacy, encaging me in hostility
Slithering vipers, entangling my wounded ankles
I hide beneath the façade of pure imagination

Demons entice me, foreboding forces compel inside
Somber glares, glimmering through dissolving masks
I hide beneath the façade of pure imagination

Torturous howls, echo in cruelty and malevolence
Streams of scarlet, flowing upon my frozen lake
I hide beneath the façade of pure imagination

Reaping vengeance, dearly creeping beyond
Strength and courage, such remaining powers to behold
I still hide beneath the façade of pure imagination

TigerLily
December 11th, 2009, 11:19 AM
I really like the poem Marcie, can't say I like the story behind it so much :hug:
But its a beautiful poem, it's great to be able to express your emotions so eloquently (:

nick
December 11th, 2009, 12:37 PM
Agreed. I love your choice of words in this, lovelly use of language.

Triceratops
December 12th, 2009, 06:06 AM
Kiitos. <3