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SlightlySane
December 4th, 2009, 10:43 PM
In my mirror
there lives a boy
His stance like mine
And eyes so fine

Tall and graceful
He looks to me
In his eyes I can see
He is sad like I can be

A tear falls
A shiver runs
His hands shaking
His feet numb

He lives in cold
This mirror boy
His face shows me
He is no toy

He raises his hand
For mine to meet
Through this glass
I feel no heat

Smile my boy
I beg of him
Silent words
Slowly begin

In my mirror
There lives a boy
His face so sad
His story is bad

Appleton
December 5th, 2009, 01:00 AM
Nice Ryan. I'm glad I finally got to read one of your poems. :)

Aves
December 6th, 2009, 09:26 PM
Nice Ryan. I'm glad I finally got to read one of your poems. :)

Ahem...his name's Ryne :P (Not pronounced like Ryan either :P)

Anyway, it's amazing Ryne, you have so much talent. Don't let it go to waste :)

Hatsune Miku
December 7th, 2009, 03:45 AM
Nice. You have talent. I agree with Connor, don't let that talent go to waste!

nick
December 7th, 2009, 04:20 AM
Love it Ryne, +rep

Giles
December 7th, 2009, 10:59 AM
Nice. I don't usually like poems.

ErykaInspire.
December 9th, 2009, 08:06 PM
Amazing.....
I love it<3