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Quick_Sylver
November 25th, 2009, 10:09 PM
I didn't write this but I thought you guys would like to read this.

Anger Hides, It Doesn't Heal
by Anonymous by request

Anger is the thread
Whose stitches close new wounds
Wounds that aren't yet healed
Lesions closed too soon

Pain, it stubbornly lingers
Hatreds infection spreads within
Old regrets feed the disease
Others' mercy pricks you like a pin

The stitches keep coming undone
But each time you sew them up tighter
You ignore the burden on your back
But you know it's not getting any lighter

Your body's weaker now
Trying to fight the disease
This infection you keep ignoring
It comes with it's brutal fees

You refuse to open the scab
That hides decay underneath
Little do you know below the surface,
The flesh is rotten and deceased

But still you refuse to reopen
What you think will bring back pain from the past
But really opening the wound
Will let it repair at last

You feel the pain and it troubles you
But you fear what will come to pass,
If you take a chance to let it mend,
Will even more sorrow come flooding back?

Times goes on, the evil, it spreads
And finally, in defeat
You say let's deal with this now
And at last you take a timid peek

It's hard to bear, to feel at first
The past, when it's full of betrayal
But you clean out the blood
And you wipe off the wound
And finally leave it to heal

Now the pain goes away
And the blood, you rinse off
Eventually leaving a simple red scar
But instead of reminders of burden and angst
You remember the growth that took place in your heart

You can take on pain
You can take on hardships
If you know how to heal, you'll survive
You learned wounds can't be closed before they're ready
And now you're prepared to fight better next time

Obscene Eyedeas
December 17th, 2009, 11:09 AM
That is brilliant amazing writing. Huever wrote it shld be proud