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ErykaInspire.
November 11th, 2009, 11:12 AM
I spent the night at his house and woke up in his arms. It was amazing. (':

I could open my eyes
and see you laying there
wrapped up in each others arms
is it obvious we care?

I lay my head upon your chest
and listen to your heart pound
Your slow steady breathing
is the sweetest sound

Darling, as you squeeze me
unconsciously, lost in a fantasy
I wonder what you're thinking
as you lay right next to me.

I notice as your heart beat
slowly changes pace
you're waking from your dreams
with a smile on your face.

Reaching down and kissing me
As I start to say "I love you"
You hold me in your arms
and reply "I love you, too"

I could stay like this forever
I have given you my heart
I will love you until the end
Because we'll never fall apart.

Aves
November 11th, 2009, 12:18 PM
Awwww.
Very nice work Eryka :)
One of your best, in my opinion.

ErykaInspire.
November 11th, 2009, 12:33 PM
Awh, thank you so much! :D

Harley Quinn
November 11th, 2009, 12:47 PM
Eryka, That's an amazing poem, i hope Dale likes it :D
i agree with Connor, your best one so far IMO

laurita_21
November 11th, 2009, 12:51 PM
well i dont really know you but i know this is about some "dale" guy. hahaa
i think is really sweet XD!!

ErykaInspire.
November 11th, 2009, 12:58 PM
Dale loved it :P I made him a little chart to go with it. It's in my "AddictionAtItsFinest" Photo Album.
Thank you both very much<3