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SingASadSong4408
November 5th, 2009, 03:40 PM
Hey! I just realized today that I havent posted on here in forever. I missed it! I wrote this song yesterday, I think, and its got quite a story behind it.

I saw my guy friend, who I liked, and also whom I've recently had a falling out with, yesterday, and everything came flooding back (as absurdly cliche as it sounds), and I needed to get it off my chest. Comments would be appreciated :) The whole song is mostly vague stories that have to do with him, and what we went through together before he left, and I like how this one turned out. tell me if I'm crazy, though. :)

Without further a due, Here it is!



"Do You Remember?"

I can see you now
Leaning against my locker
Holding my books for me
With that gallant smile
In your eyes

Do you remember?

I can see you now
Holding the ring she left you with
Saying you want to find her
But you just don’t know how

Do you remember?

I can see you now
With your nose buried in that book
You said you never liked
But it was the story of your life

Do you remember?
Do you remember how it felt?

CHOURS:
It felt like
stage lights
and kisses goodnight
and snow falling in your hair.
It's holding hands at Two A.M.
It's waking up
thinking of you again
its the smell of November last year.
It's dreaming of you
at four in the morning,
your head in your hands
as you realize you're falling
and you don't mind.
Do you remember?

I can see you now
You're crying into your sleeve
You don’t want anyone to see you
No one but me

Do you remember?

I can see you now
With the lines across your arms
Can I kiss the pain away?
Can I convince you to stay?

Do you remember what it felt like?

CHORUS:
It felt like
stage lights
and kisses goodnight
and snow falling in your hair.
It's holding hands at Two A.M.
It's waking up
thinking of you again
its the smell of November last year.
It's dreaming of you
at four in the morning,
your head in your hands
as you realize you're falling
and you don't mind.
Do you remember?

Memories fade
all too fast
Days turn into minutes into months into years
into pasts...
I guess you don't remember.

It felt like
stage lights
and kisses goodnight
and snow falling in your hair.
It's holding hands at Two A.M.
It's waking up
thinking of you again
its the smell of November last year.
It's dreaming of you
at four in the morning,
your head in your hands
as you realize you're falling
and you don't mind.
Do you remember?

I can see you now
Turning the other way
Maybe you'll come back to me
Maybe another day

I can see you now
The stage is your second home
Your eyes so bright and alive
I wonder if you feel alone

Do you remember?
Do you remember what it felt like?

(slower, softer)
It felt like
stage lights
and kisses goodnight
and snow falling in your hair.
It's holding hands at Two A.M.
It's waking up
thinking of you again
its the smell of November last year.
It's dreaming of you
at four in the morning,
your head in your hands
as you realize you're falling
and you don't mind.
But I guess you don't remember...


Thanks in advance for reading (and hopefully commenting!) :)

----Carlie <3

TigerLily
November 5th, 2009, 04:24 PM
I really like it Carlie, sounds like it would make a beautiful song :)

I love this line, really stood out to me:

Days turn into minutes into months into years
into pasts...

Nice work :)

nick
November 5th, 2009, 05:03 PM
Agreed, nice work

BuryYourFlame
November 6th, 2009, 06:35 AM
i really like the chorus, instantly thought of a melody line to it lol :D