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SlightlySane
November 2nd, 2009, 08:31 PM
Soldier Story

Bound by his chains so tight
He struggles to the morning light
When dawn breaks his soul I crushed
His run to freedom has just been hushed

While he lay with his eyes awake
He’s body trembles as he quakes
With bars that block his clear view
He dreams a dream of redemptions renew

Silently the years have gone
But never has his voice been done
His long lone story tells a strong tale
About the fight he intends not to fail

This he knows is not his fate
To find his life he can only wait
Till his time begins its lift
For this false imprisonment to shift

A hero of his own he has become
Awaiting the day his rescue can come
His eyes hold the steady gaze
On the barrier to part and lead his way

So long to him a majestic one
His noble deed will be done
And not a tear will his eyes shed
He will triumph with pride till he is dead

tyler27846
November 2nd, 2009, 10:53 PM
wow that was good i love reading your stuff

mrmcdonaldduck
November 3rd, 2009, 05:52 AM
bloody brilliant

nick
November 3rd, 2009, 11:35 AM
good one mate!

Yesterdays Hero
November 3rd, 2009, 04:06 PM
Thats great.

ErykaInspire.
November 4th, 2009, 08:08 PM
Holy Bajeebus o.O
Yes, I actually said Bajeebus. Wow. I Fail.
But this poem is EPIC AND AMAZING AND WOW!!!
(: