My puppet dearest

[SlightlySane]

Dance for me my puppet dear
As I pull your little strings
Feel the weight lift from your body
As my hands become your wings

One foot forward
The next hand down
Follow every string I tug
While you prance along the ground

Smile, wave, and twirl your hair
Just comply there’s no way to prepare
This is no choice for you
I’ll lead you anywhere

Your hair so soft
Your eyes so fine
Your beauty unique
I’m so glad your mine

So, dance with me my puppet dear
Follow me with each tug you feel
And speak the words I yearn to hear

Oh please love me my puppet dear

[ErykaInspire.]

Awhh; that's the sweetest poem i've ever read! :D

[YesterdaysNews]

I LOVE it Ryne :D
Great job

[SlightlySane]

Thanks amanda and eryka I'm glad you like it

[nick]

I like it too, but it seems to me to have a dark edge to it too so I wouldnt call it sweet.

[SlightlySane]

I'm glad you like it. I also found it interesting that they found it sweet. It all depends on the way you interpret it I guess. That's the joy of poetry. I must say though it was with a darker intent that it was written.

[ErykaInspire.]

I found it sweet because of the last line.
and to me it's like..
you're willing to move the one you love in any direction to get them to notice you.

[Yesterdays Hero]

That's very nice.