EverlostPoet
October 18th, 2009, 04:04 PM
A note I wrote for my love. anyway I can improve?
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7 months ago, a wonderful girl told me she loves me more than a friend… “Love; To want the best for someone, no matter what." But that's not what I'm thinking of. I'm thinking more,” is what she told me. Astounded, I fell into shock. “Wait, this girl, who I’ve had a crush on, sees me as more than a friend?!” ran through my mind. You see, even though my name means “Trash” I never had experienced the full meaning of my name. I had lots of girl friends, and even sisters, but… still.. Still a bit in shock, I eagerly answered back by telling I, too, love her. A little reluctant at first, because of being long distance, the wonderful girl accepted the role of my girlfriend…
Now, it’s October 15, 2009… And that role of girlfriend is more than just that. Both parties are crazy in love with one another. I never would have dreamed of such a thing happening to me. I had crushes in previous years, but this girl was more... I waited for someone who was different from the rest, and dang… she’s more than worth the wait!
Though we've known each other for almost a year now, it's through the past seven months, we both have really grown. It’s been filled with laughter, joy, curiosity, and even sorrow. Supporting and praying for one another through harsh times in both of our lives. God blessed me greatly with her.(Even that one time at Camp..) Now, don’t get me wrong, our relationship has been far from perfect. We’ve endured many rough patches… But we’re still together again despite that. As I always have told her, “What doesn’t break us, makes us stronger.” It’s when a couple can go through these trials, that it shows what is fake and what is true… Our love is true.(and yet people still try to bring us apart.)
What started out as an innocent friendship because of our faith—has turned into something greater. Through our many hours of honest, heart-to-heart talks we’ve come to realize that we are very similar. We can relate to one another in a way that no one else can. “Perfect for one another” is what we’ve been told. And I agree. Helping one another improve not only emotionally, but spiritually, God has continued to bless our relationship.
“You’ll never know how much I love you…” she whispers in my ear. I smile, because I know that’s true… But I smile because I also know thats he will never know just how much I love her back. Though we both know that we have still a long ways to go, there is something we’ve both agreed on… As long as God wills it, we want to be together forever…and even longer. We’ve even talked about the future, but we both know not to rush into things… However, I cannot picture myself with anyone else. I want no one else.
Some may call me pathetic, some may say it’s just ‘puppy love’ but I know deep in my heart that it’s more than that. Most of all, I’ve fallen deeply, madly, crazy in love with her… This amazing, wonderful, caring, understanding, funny, thoughtful, romantic, Beautiful, preppy, lovable, loving, Christian girl… She is the love of my life. (And I've been told not to be tied down to one girl, but.. Maybe I like it..?)
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7 months ago, a wonderful girl told me she loves me more than a friend… “Love; To want the best for someone, no matter what." But that's not what I'm thinking of. I'm thinking more,” is what she told me. Astounded, I fell into shock. “Wait, this girl, who I’ve had a crush on, sees me as more than a friend?!” ran through my mind. You see, even though my name means “Trash” I never had experienced the full meaning of my name. I had lots of girl friends, and even sisters, but… still.. Still a bit in shock, I eagerly answered back by telling I, too, love her. A little reluctant at first, because of being long distance, the wonderful girl accepted the role of my girlfriend…
Now, it’s October 15, 2009… And that role of girlfriend is more than just that. Both parties are crazy in love with one another. I never would have dreamed of such a thing happening to me. I had crushes in previous years, but this girl was more... I waited for someone who was different from the rest, and dang… she’s more than worth the wait!
Though we've known each other for almost a year now, it's through the past seven months, we both have really grown. It’s been filled with laughter, joy, curiosity, and even sorrow. Supporting and praying for one another through harsh times in both of our lives. God blessed me greatly with her.(Even that one time at Camp..) Now, don’t get me wrong, our relationship has been far from perfect. We’ve endured many rough patches… But we’re still together again despite that. As I always have told her, “What doesn’t break us, makes us stronger.” It’s when a couple can go through these trials, that it shows what is fake and what is true… Our love is true.(and yet people still try to bring us apart.)
What started out as an innocent friendship because of our faith—has turned into something greater. Through our many hours of honest, heart-to-heart talks we’ve come to realize that we are very similar. We can relate to one another in a way that no one else can. “Perfect for one another” is what we’ve been told. And I agree. Helping one another improve not only emotionally, but spiritually, God has continued to bless our relationship.
“You’ll never know how much I love you…” she whispers in my ear. I smile, because I know that’s true… But I smile because I also know thats he will never know just how much I love her back. Though we both know that we have still a long ways to go, there is something we’ve both agreed on… As long as God wills it, we want to be together forever…and even longer. We’ve even talked about the future, but we both know not to rush into things… However, I cannot picture myself with anyone else. I want no one else.
Some may call me pathetic, some may say it’s just ‘puppy love’ but I know deep in my heart that it’s more than that. Most of all, I’ve fallen deeply, madly, crazy in love with her… This amazing, wonderful, caring, understanding, funny, thoughtful, romantic, Beautiful, preppy, lovable, loving, Christian girl… She is the love of my life. (And I've been told not to be tied down to one girl, but.. Maybe I like it..?)
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