A Walk In The Clouds

[Bougainvillea]

A WALK IN THE CLOUDS

A walk in the clouds,
Feeling like a giant.
A canopy of roof tops and trees visible,
Such is a cryptic billowing haze.
The low-lying cloud
Disguises the waking city.

The valley is imbued, penetrating
It meanders across a tranquil countenance.
Otherwise bright headlights
Become a blurred opaqueness.
Emerging through an opened window
A surreptitious flow baptizes.

Please. This is my attempt at good poetry. *Thanks god for my dictionary and thesaurus*

[SlightlySane]

This is really good for a first attempt. I like it :D . Let me know if need help with anything in the future and I'll be glad to help but it looks like you're getting it down fast.

[Bougainvillea]

Yep, I spent all week on it in English. :D

We're doing poetry.

I'm glad, because I got tired of elizabethian tragedy.

[nick]

I really like that Lawrence, some lovely phrases in there, nice use of language