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Bored0405
April 23rd, 2006, 09:40 AM
Hush

Chapter 1
The book shop

The early morning sunlight gently entered the small attic. Casting beams of light across the sleeping figure. The sun descended upwards its strong beam slowly moving up the stone pillar. After several moments the heated beam fell upon the clear crystal perched at the top of the pillar. The sunlight splintered outwards magnified shining a blinding light upon the sleeping town. The attic was thrown into brightness, the girls eyes behind the eyelids burned. Leaping up from her ragged bed she sprinted, to a small piece of shade in a dirt ridden corner. Reaching for a rope, she pulled powerfully downwards, with a mighty groan the feathered blinds folded over the immense sunlight.

Even with the thick blinds covering it, the sunlight shone though harshly, the girl however had already scrambled into her morning clothes. Spiriting down the rotting staircase, she reached the smoke filled kitchen. Her mother bustled about madly, stirring pots and clashing pans in a desperate attempt to prepare breakfast before first call. Her father, a warlock assistant, hurried into the room, paper piled high on his arms. Cramming a piece of toast down his throat, he gave his wife an uneven kiss, before running out the door, pausing to ruffle his daughter’s hair irritatingly.

Her mother dropped the pans in despair. Sitting down heavily on her chair, she sighed deeply.
“Hurry up girl, first call is less then ten minutes from now, for god sake, have some urgency for once.”
Her daughter merely stared at her pityingly.
“Mother, I am only a two minute run from Mr Potters shop!”
Her mother pushed back an irately hair from her flushed forehead and simply growled:
“Well, just watch yourself, the last thing me and your father needs is a jobless daughter!”
Sofia expression did not change her eyes balls simply rolled, much to her mother annoyance.
“Don’t you roll your eyes at me young lady, it aren’t my fault you failed your grade one exam!”
Sofia finished her orange juice and picked up her work things with distaste.
“Who wants to be fourteen and going to school anyway”
“Someone who wants to get a high paying job, you ungrateful little…”
But Sofia had already left the ting apartment, the door slamming behind her.

Smog covered the crowned streets. Various salesmen wormed around each other, the noise deafening. Up on the higher platforms smart businessmen in neat ties walked carelessly, unaware of the goings on below. But below them Sofia ducked and jumped across the stalls of the market. Just as she reached the aged door of Mr Potter’s book shop, a high pitch wail erupted from an unknown source. Signalling the beginning of First Call, the ghasts slowly floated downwards from there dank home in the towers above, patrolling the streets for the unemployed or lazy. Sofia gazed curiously upwards, as the cloaked figures descended down to earth, she entered the dust ridden shop silently.

Mr Potter stood leaning over examining a book. His bulging eyes scanning the page intensely. Sofia walked causally behind him, absorbed in the ancient atmosphere of the book shop. He turned around, slightly startled by her appearance; he quickly regained his icy front.
“Well I suppose late, is better then never. Now Mrs Moore wants Lovers beach, aisle five under romance.”

Sofia felt his eagle eyes burning into her back as she walked away. The books were stacked high, volume upon volume that spirals towards the ceiling, Mr Potter didn’t believe in bookcases for such “cheap dribble”. It would take her the best part of an hour, to operate Mr Potter’s unstable ordering system and she set to work digging around the various volumes, slowly climbing the great towers of paper. After what seemed like centauries of painstaking work, Sofia blistering hands laid thankfully on the moth eaten cover of Lovers beach. Proud of her early up heaving of the book, she headed back to Mr Potters desk.

As she approached she heard Mr Potter acidic voice barking down the phone.
“I am sorry Sir, but this book is not for sale, it is part of my private collection and is priceless.”
The mysterious buyer seemed unaffected by this passionate outburst and persisted. Mr Potters bit his lip in anger.
“I don’t care if you work for the Black Witch, the book of glass roses is un sellable, if The queen of darkness wants it, she can very well come here and get it.”
Slamming the phone down, he turned to face Sofia who had just emerged from behind the book shelf.
“The book you wanted.” She stated slyly.
“Yes very good...erm just leave it on the table there”
The high pitch wail, signally the end of First Call, shrieked painfully outwards. Mr Potter head spun around at the small clock on the wall.
“I am going out, I will be back in time for Second Call, touch nothing”
Neatly putting on his hat, he exited the shop.

Sofia had never enjoyed the simple life of service that most commoners of hush seemingly enjoyed. She had never seen the point of working yourself to the bone, just to pass your Grade 3 exam, for the privilege of carrying warlock’s books around after him, like her father did. See didn’t see the attraction of running her own shop or stall and she neither wanted to harbour a family, she simply drifted in life unsure of her purpose or goals dreaming of something better. So as she heard Mr Potter slam the door firmly behind him, she made a certain decision.

Bolting the door shut behind her. She drew the blinds with haste, closing out the still violent sunlight. Hurrying to the area she roughly thought the desired book to reside, she began clawing at various volumes. After several moments of all most panicked searching, her fingers touched the smooth surface of the book of glass rose. Her heart stopped racing and her breath slowed, she carefully opened the book, its pages unworn by age and the writing clear as the day it was printed. She was in ore as she turned to the first page curiously. The book of glass roses was written superbly at the top in some ancient style of writing, below a carefully crafted sketch of a hand, with the words for those who seek adventure. Sofia eyes flicked back towards the front of the shop in unease, had she just heard the door creak open, no just her over active imagination, and she turned back to the book.

Her hand shaking she placed it in the sketch, her fingers slipping easily into the shape. She felt her hand being pulled sharply into the page, it sinking, in to what seemed like quick sand, the page folding inwards with her struggling wrist. The ink of the pages spiralled up her arm, burning her tender skin as they went. She could she them flashing past her eyes, being absorbed in her brain and being locked away just as easily. The ink still whipped around her, but her hand slowly emerge from the book, as the last drop of ink disappeared in to her struggling brain, her hand broke free and the book shut sharply, missing her shaking fingers by inches.

kolte
April 23rd, 2006, 11:45 AM
I really liked it, I think its a wonderful job!

Bored0405
April 23rd, 2006, 12:21 PM
high praise indeed, cheers now theres at least one person waiting for chapter 2.

kolte
April 23rd, 2006, 12:51 PM
high praise indeed, cheers now theres at least one person waiting for chapter 2.
You know it!

R&b_Boy
April 23rd, 2006, 01:36 PM
yea pretty good

Bored0405
April 24th, 2006, 03:08 PM
the 2nd and sadly last part, as i don't want post anymore in case someone nicks it lol, so enjoy the taster and i pray it get published on day!

She fell back onto the rot ridden floor in shock. Still shaking she stood up weary of the time, five minutes remained of the break and she must get back to her post at the till, smoothing over her ruffled clothes she crept across the shop, and pulled herself on to the comfortable chair. Pulling out a book, she propped it up with an interested look on her face, she turned the pages. Her mind constantly reliving the event that had just happened.

The Eye clung silently to the edge of a bookshelf. Bending downwards it leaps across the isle, it sharp legs sinking into the wood with ease. The eye spun rapidly, focusing in sharply on the book it seeks. Jumping down gracefully, in bounds energetically towards the volume, leaping up onto the front cover. Examining the cover closely, the creature seems satisfied with its achievement. Its spiders like legs expand outwards clawing its way around the book. Its talon like legs then proceeded to crush the book, crumbling it inwards, leaving a small mesh of paper which it hold delicately in its front two pincers.

Its eye swivels quickly around the murky room, catching onto a small crack on the left hand side. Bouncing from bookcase to bookcase it reaches the edge of the room. Its careful eye gazes at the room containing the young girl one more time, before climbing into the enhanced sunlight. A harpy sweeps down its leather bound wings beating unevenly, snatching the crushed book in its deadly talons, it lunches its body inwards. Flying ungracefully though the grimy depths of the poor region, before spiralling upwards to the middle class region, sliding nibble under a transporters train, he continues his journey upwards in to the grand splendour of the upper class region. Gliding effortlessly though the perfectly cut hedges, he turns lazily and with a beat of his deformed wings, speeds towards the black witches castle in glee.

Chapter two
The black witch

The black witch stood, gazing on her city with pride. Her glassy eyes beneath a high rimmed hat of dark black, which matched her, stood of the same colour. Her shinny black locks sank to her shoulders, a sharp contrast to her pure white skin. The Smokey depths of the poorer district seemed so distant, the dull landscape of the middle class district was blurred and far off, only the gleaming surface of the richer districts were clear to her, a small smile graced her icy face. There was a sharp rap on the door, turning around she saw her servant enter. His limps stretched to twice there original length and his face long and thin, he was identical to the other servants she employed.
“The book you required, mistress”
“Thank you” she snapped pointing at the table next to her, he left without making eye contact with her.

Picking up the cursed book between her sharp nails, she gently murmured a hymn of some kind, slowly the book regained it’s an original shape. After several moments the book looked new and untouched in her hand. She attempts to open it only to find the volume covers reluctant to open. Not worried by this predicament, she flicked her longest nail and used the ink now dribbling from, the tip to draw a symbol on the books clear cover. When finished she placed her hand firmly on top of it and closed her eyes, a flicker of effort appeared on her face, disappearing instantly. Sacrifice she touched the book and it sprang open. Her eyes widened in anger, as she flicked through the blank pages of the book. She snapped her fingers viciously and a servant scuttled in.
“Get me Tomeo, NOW!”

The black witch strode across the clear white room. The door opened and Tomeo, the harpy, entered humbly.
“You requested me, mistress”
The witch turned and looked at him in distaste.
“Oh you’ll have to do more then call me misses to get out of this one, you stupid little creature. Didn’t it pass though minute brain to check the book before delivery this book to check there was something in it!”
The harpy continued to look down, ashamed.
“Well Mis…erm…you did say…”
“Oh so it’s my fault now is it, well we can’t have that come here and you be ruler of this city”
The harpy ugly face looked confused. One glare from the witch, he skidded over towards her, her hand whipped up to his neck and broke it swiftly.
“Always said you were Spineless” she spat as his body feel with a thud.
“Get me the eye that got this, now!”

A servant hurried out of the room with hast. While the remaining ones easily scooped up the copse, there long limbs easily wrapping around the body. She turned the deserted pages carefully. Murmuring quietly to herself, after several moments she slammed the book close violently.
“Someone must have got to the book first and absorbed its powers, interesting.”
“Yes mistress” the servant inserted briefly.
“Oh please, you don’t even know what I am talking about” she said, spinning on her heal, a crooked smile on her face. Her hand twisted crushing an invisible object evilly; the servants face turned deep red, before exploding in a shower of red blood, expanding outwards, before splattering onto the polished floor.
“Now look what you made me do, people are going to think I’m mean” she purred defensively, she flicked her hair in disaffection she looked pointy at another servant who quickly scrubbed the floor.

As the servant removed the last drop of drying blood from the floor, another slinging the dead servant over his shoulder, a sharp rap at the door, informed the servants to make there exit, scrapping the last part of brain cleanly from the surface he swooped up and left with the rest. Two men entered with a senior servant holding out the offending eye.
“General and vicar” the witch looked bemused “how pleasant to see you two again, I suppose your here about the book, can’t keep anything quiet in this face” she said, her icy eyes fiery with hidden rage.
She gentle placed her fingers around the eyes base, her sharp fingers gently stroking it; suddenly her fingers tighten slicing the eye off its spider-like legs. The legs shrivelled and died instantly, but the eyes still gazed upwards in fear. The general and vicar looked onwards, interested but keeping there distance from the witch, until she had beaconed them over. The witched sensed this, amused, she gestured kindly to them, her index finger causally calling them forward. They glanced meekly at each other and stepped forward.

The witch had occupied herself pouring various unknown substances into a sliver pot and her foot, holding the horrified eye in her other hand.
“So what is your purpose of coming here gentlemen, I did not call you, so you must have some important information for me or otherwise you wouldn’t have come, uninvited” she said, her tone now cold and metallic.
“Madame” the general bellowed stepping bravely forward. “We merely thought you would need assistance in the current situation.”
“Are you suggesting I cannot handle this situation?”
The vicar gulped worriedly; taking a deep breath he joined the general.
“He didn’t mean any offence…” he began.
“Don’t talk to me like am an insolent child, you stupid little man, I have already killed two worthless souls today and just because you wear a cross doesn’t mean I will hesitate in destroying you also.”
The vicar and general recoiled backwards.
“Oh please, now I am going to find out just what happened, unless you have any useful to say don’t speak, in fact just don’t speak” she commanded, her eye bows raised.
Dropping a cube of pure white particles into the pot, a bust of ruby red flames swelled out of it, followed slowly a greenish fog drifting aimlessly.
“God, so predictable” the witch whispered, turning to the standoffish men she smiled warmly. “Here we go” she said with a quick wink.