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SlightlySane
October 16th, 2009, 10:54 PM
Forever and a day
At least that’s what they say
Forever and ever…
My ears hear that better

Because forever and a day
Would never be enough
To show you all my love

Forever and a day
Would simply be short
It’d be time spent not worth much

Forever and a day
Doesn’t last for long
Ever day has it’s night fall

So forever and ever
I say my dear love
Will be the time we are together
Time freed like a dove

Forever and ever
Is how long I’ll care
For the beauty you are
Time can not wear

Forever and ever
The longest of all
We will spend our days
With no end at all

nick
October 17th, 2009, 03:57 AM
Nice, I like it

ErykaInspire.
October 17th, 2009, 03:58 PM
It's a beautiful piece of poetry; like all of your work.
You're genuinely an amazing poet, Ryne<3

Aves
October 17th, 2009, 04:24 PM
Nice, I wish I could write poetry. I guess I'll just stick to playing guitar