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deadpie
October 10th, 2009, 09:17 PM
You look pretty neat all tied up to the wall
You look pretty beat when I watch you crawl
My foot on your jaw
Making you swallow your own balls
Shut up and get what’s coming to you
Coward, all showered in your own blood as you die in the mud

My fist in your face
My anger, my pleasure, my rage
Your remains all over the place
Clean the mess you made

You look pretty sexy all hiding under my bed
You look pretty sexy all next to me without a head
And screw every little thing you said
Fuck you and the past
It’s the last thing I want to look at

Open your mouth and speak to me
I'm gonna cut out your tongue and ruin you violently
I'll open the windows and doors and you can scream loud
But notice that nobody cares about you to help
Call me insane, I'll put a grenade in your mouth
And blow your eye sockets out
You can't say your heart is broken if you never had one

unknown2011
October 10th, 2009, 09:19 PM
um......violent. something wrong?

mrmcdonaldduck
October 10th, 2009, 09:45 PM
well, that was um......... violent.

ErykaInspire.
October 11th, 2009, 07:31 PM
It's not the violence I noticed, but the feeling that you're heart broken or something..
Are you ok?

deadpie
October 11th, 2009, 08:31 PM
Yeah i'm ok, i just felt like i needed to release the anger out in this poem for someone.

ErykaInspire.
October 11th, 2009, 08:40 PM
Good enough reason :p
Poetry is definitely a good release.
Best of luck with everything.
x

Delusion15
October 11th, 2009, 10:57 PM
Wow..................Good job