svlust06
October 3rd, 2009, 10:37 PM
Hey I will be posting a few poems I wrote I would love your guys feed back on them
The Scream is calling me again the bright red one that makes me cringe. It is trying to sooth me the hurt with its false hope begging pleading for more. The world seem's to swriling as the scream grows louder and louder. Why won;t it let me be. Its comfort swelling and breathing its lies into my head the red scream yelling for more anguish to flow from my arms and leave more scars of pain.
The Scream is calling me again the bright red one that makes me cringe. It is trying to sooth me the hurt with its false hope begging pleading for more. The world seem's to swriling as the scream grows louder and louder. Why won;t it let me be. Its comfort swelling and breathing its lies into my head the red scream yelling for more anguish to flow from my arms and leave more scars of pain.