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svlust06
October 3rd, 2009, 10:37 PM
Hey I will be posting a few poems I wrote I would love your guys feed back on them

The Scream is calling me again the bright red one that makes me cringe. It is trying to sooth me the hurt with its false hope begging pleading for more. The world seem's to swriling as the scream grows louder and louder. Why won;t it let me be. Its comfort swelling and breathing its lies into my head the red scream yelling for more anguish to flow from my arms and leave more scars of pain.

Delusion15
October 4th, 2009, 12:10 AM
very dark but cool

svlust06
October 4th, 2009, 11:58 AM
here is another i wrote...

The sky is looming a blood read as the sun starts to fade on this dismal and destroyed world. All seek the monsters to consume my soul. My still beating heart thursted with the dagger of betraly. I should have know happy would never last in this tourted life I live. Alone again like the years so long ago and rotting on the inside. Why did I ever believe , why did I ever let you in. The pain wprse than ever before that resides in me. How can I grow with no to help show me the way, no one to trust. Must I be doomed to a lofe of solitude of a life that I did not ask to be given. It is cruel and harsh and I just wish it could end and be no more.

Triceratops
October 4th, 2009, 12:09 PM
:arrow: Moving to The Open Book, where all pieces of poetry and other things relating to writing belong.