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Darkness
September 29th, 2009, 06:47 AM
Nick said I should move this here from my blog so I have...

When you were alone,


When you were alone, was it so awful that you did as you did?


When you cut to the bone, was the warmth of your blood your only companionship?


Was it so bad that you must carefully clad your scars from those whom hid from you?


Was it so that you could show your pain, mark out every fall and trip


Would it be a knife, a match, a razor blade, that drew your lonesome journey across the canvas of your body?


I weep to think of the blood running down your arm,


I cry to think of the flood that welled from your shoulder,


I cower to think of it falling across your breast,


I sob to think of it threading a lace across your chest,


I recoil to think of that essence of life, cascading down your side, to drizzle the floor with ruby liquid,


I Break to think that
you endured this alone,


I curse to have not known you then,


I moan to know that you
might do so again,


I digress, should I hold you, shield you from pain, harm and suffering,
Or let it harden you?


But, worse is the knowledge
of the tears you shed,
It would drown me,
and hounds me still,
every day,
and all
of the
night


This is about a girl I know and I was thinking about her it just came to me, and well here it is.

nick
September 29th, 2009, 06:59 AM
Now I can tell you again, thats awesome.

NightFighter
September 29th, 2009, 07:38 AM
Very Awesome :)

Darkness
November 1st, 2009, 01:07 PM
Thank you, here's another,

To the two whom I have betrayed,
I regret that treachery so, so much,

To you few I would gladly die for,
regardless of former promises,

To you one I've met and shalt never forget,
I love you with all my heart and soul,

To you I have given such offence,
even though I have tried all I can to mend this damage, It's not enough,
It will never be enough,
As I can never be enough,

To the other who's trust I have cast from me, for your own sake.
And yet your love endures

To you oppressed, Abused, violated Girl,
You have suffered too much,
Yet you still suffer such hardship,
And bear troubles you should not need to bear,

To the two I have betrayed....
...I love you both.

Yesterdays Hero
November 1st, 2009, 11:50 PM
Very, very, very awesome.

1_21Guns
November 4th, 2009, 04:48 PM
This is aswesome and very well written :) I like it.

Darkness
November 4th, 2009, 04:58 PM
Thank you both, :D