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Parasite
April 14th, 2006, 05:01 PM
violent push towards perfection.
Hold your glances for the resurrection.
Oh, how I'm rising, rising so high
There is no way you'll catch me, you should'nt even try.
"Bang!"
The gun shot sounds, im on my knees, i've fallen to the ground.
For I was up so high, the bottom was so far..
If I had only stayed down low,
never to been seen at all.

meh, austin=bad at poetry

advent_child
April 15th, 2006, 01:01 AM
never say that!! as long as one person liked it, it was worth writing. and i liked it!!!
If you feel uncomftorble with rhyming, try unrhymed iambic pentameter.