Lethel Injection

[deadpie]

I want to feel it
The needle in my throat
Even thought I still want to finish my suicide note
Strapping me down to a chair
Blood running down my eyes
Sending volts to my head
And then I'm dead

My whole life I did nothing right
Gods plan is god never gave a damn
For me to go threw all the pain
Just to die today.

I'm ready so bring your rope
One last laugh the second you let go
And I want you to slit my wrists
Just let it all come to an end
You don't know your just doing
A big fucking favor for me
I live and then I rot
I breathe and then I'm gone

Tied up in a stray jacket
Anchored five billion feet below hell
To be composed into ashes of dust
For everyone to breathe.

[nick]

There are a lot of interesting thoughts and ideas in there. I love the first two stanzas, not so keen on the last two. Its good but doesnt quite wow me. I'd like to read some more from you though.

[Sugaree]

Really good, but you spelled "Lethal" wrong. Always make sure to check your grammar!

[deadpie]

yeah, grammer is not my best. thanks for the replies guys. :D

[aaaaaaaaaaaaaaagg]

Wow. Story of my day. I thought it was straight jacket...?