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tyler27846
September 13th, 2009, 01:08 AM
The Wedding Ring


In the mall a couple looks around for a wedding ring for their special day looking for a ring as beautiful as that day the woman looks around and says honey I want that ring. Then the man replied honey I got this one for you its not the best one but for now it will have to do. Wedding ring with a tiny diamond stone sitting there on some pretty gold without love it is nothing only love can complete a wedding ring.
At the church on a nice summer afternoon the church is filled with old familiar wedding tunes. Then the preacher man says his little speech the bride looking pretty as a peach then he gives her the ring and says with this ring I thee wed. Wedding ring with a tiny diamond stone sitting there on some pretty gold without love it is nothing only love can complete a wedding ring.
In a nice town house outside of town the newlywed couple fights and have fall outs I know she feel like bailing out then the husband come and says I know for certain I don’t love you she shoves him and throws down the ring then walks out the door and says like me our love goes out the door. Wedding ring with a tiny diamond stone sitting there on some pretty gold without love it is nothing only love can complete a wedding ring.

Yesterdays Hero
September 13th, 2009, 07:57 AM
Very good.

teenanx94
September 13th, 2009, 09:55 PM
I like it. :-) thumbs up.

DecemberRain
September 15th, 2009, 03:05 PM
I like this one too:)

jude12
May 14th, 2011, 04:06 AM
i like this a very nice statement about wedding ring

RoseyCadaver
May 18th, 2011, 07:15 PM
Sweet!I'm jealous of yo skills :P!