View Full Version : Afraid Of The Dark
kenoloor
September 12th, 2009, 08:59 PM
pie.
Bougainvillea
September 12th, 2009, 10:18 PM
I'm actually afraid of the dark.
Yesterdays Hero
September 13th, 2009, 07:58 AM
That is very good writing.
nick
September 13th, 2009, 08:04 AM
This is very good, I like it. One minor thing though, it feels to me as if there's a word missing at the end of the second line of the last verse. +rep anyway, keep up the good work!
kenoloor
September 13th, 2009, 08:08 AM
This is very good, I like it. One minor thing though, it feels to me as if there's a word missing at the end of the second line of the last verse. +rep anyway, keep up the good work!
Sorry about that. Fixed, and thanks for pointing that out. And thanks very much for the rep!!
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