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EverlostPoet
September 11th, 2009, 11:55 AM
I dream relentlessly,
about you and me,
of what could be,
instead of living off memories.

In my dreams,
The world comes down,
ripping at the seams,
Shadowing a forgotten frown.

In my dreams,
I witness an utmost grace,
beyond the low esteems,
waiting for our faithful embrace.

In my dreams,
I anticipate our meeting,
through the suns glaring beams,
The dreams are repeating.

Now those dreams are gone,
No dream can be this real,
This reality is way overdrawn,
This is not surreal.

EverlostPoet
September 13th, 2009, 09:09 AM
well no comments Guess it sucks Lulz

Blue63
September 13th, 2009, 06:43 PM
No, it doesn't suck, it's inspiring. I guess this area doesn't get to much traffic cause that was amazing. Bravo, very deep(as it should be), I love the theme, well done!

EverlostPoet
September 14th, 2009, 04:50 AM
Thanks :D

EverlostPoet
December 29th, 2009, 04:16 PM
Sorry for the double post. Just remember I posted this poem. <3