Come evening

[nick]

Come evening hurry on,
chase away the daytime hours,
what use to me is daylight
without my love?

Come evening, come you soon,
bring hope and expectation
of time together, time shared,
with my love.

Come evening, wait though, wait,
for my love is away,
and so for now the evening
just extends the dreary day.

Come evening, find me now
morose and melancholy.
I miss you, though you're not long gone,
my absent love.

Come evening, that at last
I may find rest in sleep,
where sadness may perchance give way
to dreams of love.

[Zazu]

*thumbs up* :)

[The Joker]

*Hug*

[TigerLily]

This is beautiful Nick, nice work :)

[Quick_Sylver]

Excuse me for asking this but have you thought about publishing your poems?
it was a thought that crossed my mind when I read these. They're very high-class. 6/6

[BlackenedSilver]

Great poem Nick :mrgreen:

[nick]

Thankyou kind people!

[Contra]

What a beautiful work of art! Congrats Nick! :)

[nick]

Excuse me for asking this but have you thought about publishing your poems?

No, lets not get carried away. I hadnt written any poems before I joined vt, then they just came. I am quite vain about them in truth and have indexed them in my member's forum and included in a link in my signature (as below). That's as close to publishing as is ever going to happen.

What a beautiful work of art! Congrats Nick! :)

John what a lovely comment, thanks mate.