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nick
September 4th, 2009, 08:54 AM
hfj osro

I worry as the days go by
without a word from you,
I wonder how you're feeling
and how you're getting through.

You may think no cares though,
I know that cant be true.
For in this silly heart of mine
there's love enough for you.

Dont hide away for ever,
though you're feeling blue,
just let me know you're still alive,
just "Hello" will do.

ErykaInspire.
September 4th, 2009, 09:22 AM
Wow, Nick.
Short and still amazing!!! :D

TigerLily
September 4th, 2009, 09:24 AM
Beautiful as ever Nick.

nick
September 4th, 2009, 09:24 AM
Generally I can only come up with a poem when there's a real emotion behind it. This was no exception.

Zazu
September 4th, 2009, 04:52 PM
Tres belle nick :)

Bougainvillea
September 4th, 2009, 04:54 PM
I love it, Nick. :)

BlackenedSilver
September 4th, 2009, 06:10 PM
Amazing nick :D I love it. x

The Joker
September 5th, 2009, 12:20 AM
I love it. :)

YesterdaysNews
September 5th, 2009, 09:49 AM
great job, I love it :)

nick
September 14th, 2009, 12:26 PM
We said "Hello" today

Yesterdays Hero
September 14th, 2009, 07:26 PM
Short but terrific.