weather poem

[diamond jetstream]

flakes of ice
as small as rice
all unique
like old antiques
sheets of white
ever so bright
falling so lightly
like an angels kiss
meant just for me
like bombs of cotton
that blanket the road
hiding the trail
to shangrela
travellers beware
youll find nothing there
covered by the white wind
filled with despair
impossible to see
what creeps below
watching and waiting
beneath the snow

what do you guys/girls think. it was my first real poem

[Project Delta]

Wow ... I think its GREAT :) but to be honest i'm not a poet.. but still you has one person who likes it :)

[diamond jetstream]

cool thanks :)

[Project Delta]

Welcome