Time for a Finnish poem about Cannibalism.

[Triceratops]

Okay, so it's my first (and I mean first) attempt at Finnish poetry. Take in to account that there might be a few mistakes.
If you're reading this, please take the time to comment as I have endured a long time of this testing my patience with ensuring the grammar, vocabulary and spelling were matched up! I'm glad it's done though.

I've made an English copy of this and it is more detailed, but doesn't have the same effect.

Kurja toivoa hengissä.
Tällaista pakenevat kerran asetettu hänen ansoja.
Vihamielinen kuiskaa jäljittää ympäri korvia.
Tällainen päättäväisesti juhlan yhteydessä jokaisen sentin sinun lihaa.

Bliss on havaitaan itkee ja pelastaja.
Tuska ja Seething kipuja ratsastaa pitkin kehoa.
Kautta silmät on verta tyhjennys alkaen vanteen.
Passion hohtavan yhden sielun ydin.
Ripping lisäksi yksi lopullisen elämän linjaa.
Nautiskellen jokaisen makuun, mitä on jäljellä.
Sietämätöntä kärsimystä kestää.

Tarkoituksena veren jano tekee toistaa menestyksen.
Vielä luopua paljain luiden keskuudessa.

Thank you. :)

[Bougainvillea]

I dun understand...

*Pulls up google translator*

Oh, Marcie.
It was beautiful.

You're an amazing poet.
I LOVE it.

[Triceratops]

Noooooooo not google translator! It's evil. :(
It will make my poem not make sense and show up all the errors I've probably made, and will disagree with my Finnish dictionary. xP

EDIT: Thank you! :D

[Bougainvillea]

It looked fine to me.

[Underground_Network]

I didn't understand any of it because I don't speak Finnish, but I'm sure that poem has to be amazing, because Marcie ish amazing. ^_^

[Triceratops]

Lol. Thank you, Adam. ^_^

[BlackenedSilver]

I also read it in google translator, It looked fine but it probably would sound alot better in finnish. Sadly I don't speak it, but it was amazing in English. :biggrin:

[Dreaming Cannibal]

RAWR! i like it!
and yeah on the google translator it looked fine! meow!

[Triceratops]

Thank you! :D