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ErykaInspire.
September 1st, 2009, 06:59 AM
This is short and to the point(:


This distance is killing me,
so you and I lets act
lets make the world smaller
and make a loving pact

if everything were in the same place
yet spread out comfortably
I'd see everyone I love
everyday, a miracle to me.

I can't stand the miles
stretching between me and you
i'll make the world even better
and I know just what to do

I'll hold the world in my hands
and bring together the distance
so many hearts, out there searching
You and I, for instance.

We love so much, but alas
the miles stretch on still
So bring together the world?
I do believe I will.

mrmcdonaldduck
September 1st, 2009, 08:26 AM
its a mad love poem.

in fact its a mad poem full stop.

keep up the good work.

ErykaInspire.
September 1st, 2009, 10:51 AM
Awhh, thank you(: I appreciate that.
x

SlightlySane
September 1st, 2009, 08:03 PM
that is WONDERFUL!

ErykaInspire.
September 2nd, 2009, 06:57 AM
Thank you, Ryne (: <3

diamond jetstream
September 4th, 2009, 01:28 AM
sniff sniff that was deep
your gifted:)

ErykaInspire.
September 4th, 2009, 06:54 AM
:D Thank you so much!