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Sunshine Girl
August 21st, 2009, 11:52 PM
Anger, it rips through him.
Tearing through his bones
Breaking the stability
What do you do when you’ve lost all control?
He screamed through the silence
Rhythm of his heart beat shattering in his ears
Rage
It controlled him.
Endless weeks, it controlled him.

SlightlySane
August 22nd, 2009, 12:14 AM
This is very powerful

Underground_Network
August 22nd, 2009, 06:35 AM
Wow, Ster, that's strong.

Who's this about Ster (is it about me :/)? (PM me if you don't want to talk here)

Sunshine Girl
August 22nd, 2009, 02:12 PM
Wow, Ster, that's strong.

Who's this about Ster (is it about me :/)? (PM me if you don't want to talk here)

Um no. stuff i write isnt "about" people. its just.. what i write :)
and thanks.

Underground_Network
August 22nd, 2009, 03:50 PM
Okay, just making sure. ^_^

:hug:
Keep writing Ster.

You're a great writer. :)

Yesterdays Hero
August 23rd, 2009, 02:06 AM
Very short, but very powerful.