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ErykaInspire.
August 20th, 2009, 06:47 PM
The light won't make a difference
so set the sky on fire
He was the only boy
my heart truly did desire

My lungs could've filled with ice
and my heart could freeze its pace
But I knew for a fact,
i won't forget his face

Even when i'm in the ground
and it's storming up above
I'll hum the beat of his heart
I'll never forget my love

And when it rains, it pours
my emotions flood the ground
Lightening strikes with thunder
creating a ghastly sound

I feel his heart beat fading
he's falling away from me
I just let you drift away
I want you to be free

So if by chance his heart
Has a new rhythm to start
My heart will change as well
So many stories it will tell

Until your hand, firmly found mine
I didn't know who I was
you pulled me up above
And saved me like you always do

I pulled you close,
and you wispered in my ear
Suddenly the sky
seemed to slightly clear

I took a step back,
the smiled up at you
You smiled back at me
and knew just what to do

you took my hand in yours
and we walked away from the pain
you never let it go
as we started dancing in the rain.

you were right, and I knew
that everything you said
was true; I held onto the pain
Locking it in my head

you held me right
and kissed my hand
as I cried a little bit.
Before me you made a stand

you wiped away my tears
and forced me to be content
I look back and laugh
at all the times I spent

crying to you, over him
when all he did was hurt me
Now i can finally open my eyes to
The love you've given me, I see

It's opened my heart and
helped me survive when I let go
I need you in my life, darling
For once, Happiness is all I know.

So hold my hand, and
spin me around once more
I could live in this happiness forever
Even when the skies continue to pour.

NightFighter
August 20th, 2009, 08:02 PM
... wow

How do you write that amazingly!?! =]

Dzefry
August 21st, 2009, 07:18 AM
My lungs could've filled with ice
and my heart could freeze its pace
But I knew for a fact,
i won't forget his face

Even when i'm in the ground
and it's storming up above
I'll hum the beat of his heart
I'll never forget my love



Specially like these two, altho i was reading "her face" and "her heart" as i am male :D

Amazing text really ;)

simpleasthat
August 21st, 2009, 03:34 PM
You really didn't have to include me in this poem, I'm not that amazing...