spanish poem (mi Amor)

[nannichick]

he sonado por el dia que tu yo va a tocar,
he sonado por el dia en que mi vida yo pueda comensar,
entristesido esta mi corazon no haguanto el dolor,
en estar contigo mi curiosidad esta que me mata
la temptacion de estar contigo
illumina mi camino
y me deje en confussion
hay que triste yo me siento
que con ya no puedo estar feliz
porque aunque yo te quiero yo losiento pero se que el amor que debe estar para mi no existe en ti
y nada me queda porque se tu no me quieres como yo a ti
esta confussion me tiene vueltas y ya no se que hacer porque en mi vida te necessito porque extrano tu querer
vuelve a mi corazon derotado y coze las heridas que me quedan de el pasado y ya entiendo que mi amor es nada mas que una adventura que necesito disfrutar para poder olvidar.

[Charlotte]

no comprendo

[nannichick]

youre not supposed to understand it if your not spanish hello!!!!!!!!!!!

[Charlotte]

hello!!!!!!!!!!!

hi

[Aηdy]

hello!!!!!!!!!!!

hi

:lol: funny lol!! :D

[advent_child]

I have sounded by the day that your I is going to touch, I have sounded by the day in which my life I can comensar, entristesido this my heart not haguanto the pain, in being with you my curiosity this that kills temptacion to me to be with illumina you my way and it leaves me in confussion is sad I I feel that with no longer I can be happy because although I love I to you losiento but that the love that must be for my it does not exist in you and nothing I has left because your you are not wanted to me as I to you this confussion has returns no longer to me and that to do because in my life necessito you because extrano your to want it returns to my derotado heart and coze the wounds that I have left of the past and already I understand that my love is nothing but that a adventura that I need to enjoy for being able to forget. _________________


that is the google translated version...nothing rhymes when you translate it. not the most accurate tool.

[~Dazed&&Confused~]

I have sounded by the day that your I is going to touch, I have sounded by the day in which my life I can comensar, entristesido this my heart not haguanto the pain, in being with you my curiosity this that kills temptacion to me to be with illumina you my way and it leaves me in confussion is sad I I feel that with no longer I can be happy because although I love I to you losiento but that the love that must be for my it does not exist in you and nothing I has left because your you are not wanted to me as I to you this confussion has returns no longer to me and that to do because in my life necessito you because extrano your to want it returns to my derotado heart and coze the wounds that I have left of the past and already I understand that my love is nothing but that a adventura that I need to enjoy for being able to forget. _________________

I was about to do that -.-..

that is the google translated version...nothing rhymes when you translate it. not the most accurate tool.

[nannichick]

look if youre not spanish dont read the fucking poem and next time dont translate my poem cuz first of all you didnt even translate right and if i wanted in english i would have done it in english dont make me kill one of you white people.

[Whisper]

First off charlie
your freakin awesome

second nannichick very few people speak spanish
those that do are just learning it in school
Like correct me if i'm wrong guys but I don't think many people here can understand it period
so if you expected to get shinning reviews.....not gonna happen..
if you posted something in english i'm sure it'd be great though

and don't pull that racist crap
its COMPLETLY turned around now if your skin is white your FUCKED
and I think thats fucking pathedic
My ass is so white it glows like the fucking moon but please PLEASE tell me how that effects my personality
how exactly does it give you the right to judge me
enlighten me!

oh and as far as "killing" me
bring it

[Kiros]

dont make me kill one of you white people.
Ah, a threat...

I'm pretty sure that's going against a behavior rule if not just for violent suggestions.

I'm giving you an official warning... Do not make the same mistake again or you will be frozen at the least.

[kolte]

so nice that you respected the poem.
it we beautiful.
the spanish flowed nicely.
such a smooth languate.
unlike english, which is very harsh, and seemingly unpleasent.
i liked it to the extent that i read it twice

[~Dazed&&Confused~]

ye... what he said!.. -.-...

[CestDan]

Muy buen poema, me encantó!!!!!!!!!!!

[STAYING_STRONG4HIM]

I thought your poem was great! I love reading spanish...but I am not the best at it...but I'm getting better! Keep writen them in spanish...I like them just the way they are!

[Stark]

Maravilloso. Pensé que era genial.

[Jean Poutine]

look if youre not spanish dont read the fucking poem and next time dont translate my poem cuz first of all you didnt even translate right and if i wanted in english i would have done it in english dont make me kill one of you white people.
I know that this is a very old thread, but that was funny as hell.

[alexpop]

por q pusistes este poema aqui aparte ves q es un blog en ingles no en espanol
mejor escribelo en ingles para q los otros entiendan lolz