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YesterdaysNews
August 17th, 2009, 01:18 AM
When you hold me tight
it feels so right
running your fingers through my hair
I fly so high, without a care
dont let go

when you hold my hand
it gets hard for me to stand
just whisper in my ear
being with you, I have no fear
please, dont let go

the feeling as our lips touch
makes me wanna hold you so much
my heart likes skipping beats
when you sweep me off my feet
never let go

falling asleep, lying next to you
and waking up too
with a smile on my face every day
you give me a feeling that never fades away
promise me, you wont let go

opinions?

Yesterdays Hero
August 17th, 2009, 02:37 AM
I really like it. Good work.

Underground_Network
August 17th, 2009, 06:28 AM
It's amazing Amanda. ^_^

But I'd expect nothing less from you. ^_^

Deirdree.
August 17th, 2009, 06:29 AM
:O
You wrote that?
It's amazing :)
Such meaning to it

Harley Quinn
August 17th, 2009, 06:51 AM
wowzer thats good

YesterdaysNews
August 17th, 2009, 02:34 PM
thanks everyone :}

BlackenedSilver
August 17th, 2009, 03:02 PM
Wow that's great, So sweet :) <3

YesterdaysNews
August 19th, 2009, 03:34 PM
thanks :}