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ErykaInspire.
August 16th, 2009, 07:52 PM
This poem started in an IM conversation and isn't quite finished yett.
I'm trying to create an insperational piece for once.


and then my senses are so far gone, all i know is tear stains on paper.


But sometimes those tears turn into art
and my heart can even fall apart
but i'm still me, i'm still whole
and no matter what, I have my soul

Try as they might, they can't turn me
into the perfect girl they just don't see
I'll always have scars, always be lost
but I have my broken heart, no matter what the cost.

I may not know just who I am
But I can say I don't give a damn
My sense of style is all my own
and my uniqueness is clearly shown

so when you decide to judge me
Just know that I am free
I'm me, all I'll ever need
and I know I will succeed.

NightFighter
August 16th, 2009, 07:57 PM
Great poem! Well done,
I love that last line the most!

ErykaInspire.
August 16th, 2009, 07:59 PM
Thank you(: it's purely not done yet, though. I have to buff up the beginning.

Yesterdays Hero
August 17th, 2009, 02:37 AM
You're just too good.

ErykaInspire.
August 17th, 2009, 05:38 PM
Thank you(:

BuryYourFlame
August 18th, 2009, 03:50 AM
awesome work eryka :)